Thursday, October 21, 2010

Bouchercon 2010: Guppies by the Bay



A photo collage by Gigi Pandian.

Gigi Pandian is an award-winning mystery author, graphic designer and photographer based in the San Francisco Bay Area. She won the William F. Deeck Malice Domestic Grant for her first mystery novel and was a finalist in the St. Martin's Press/Malice Domestic Best First Traditional Mystery competition.

Friday, October 15, 2010

Unforgettable!

Ayo Onatade, who I met through Mystery Women in the U.K., a sisterly relation to Sisters in Crime, passed this fun idea on to me.

List 10 mysteries you’ve read that will always stick with you. Don't take too long to think about it. List the first 10 you can recall in no more than 10 minutes.

I’ll start …


Daughter of Time by Josephine Tey

Out of the Blackout by Robert Barnard

Strange Children by Kate Charles

Dreaming of the Bones by Deborah Crombie

Game of Kings by Dorothy Dunnett -- the whole Lymond series, actually!

Door Into Summer by Robert Heinlein

The Nine Tailors by Dorothy L Sayers

Tropic of Night by Michael Gruber

Wine of Angels by Phil Rickman

An Air That Kills by Andrew Taylor


Now, your turn. Ready ... set ... go!


Thursday, October 14, 2010

Sgt. Wordslayer : Resistance Training

By C.L. Phillips

Attention!

So, you're back for another SWAT Boot Camp Workout with Sgt. Wordslayer? Say it with me. SWAT: Stop Withering Away Tension. Stand up and give me five jumping jacks. You didn't think writing was all about keeping your butt in the chair, did you? No, today your blood is going to boil in your veins.

Troops, today is Resistance Training Day. You will be tougher storytellers or you will eat your pencil lead. Are you ready for your first test? In your current WIP, in Act I, who is beating your hero? Who resists your hero and makes life more difficult? What? Nobody? No, no, no, that simply won't do.

Resistance is essential for every scene. Nobody wants to read about a weakling getting what they want every time they ask for it. Resistance creates action. Swings and Beats. Conversations with your mother-in-law. Doesn't matter what you call it, your hero needs opposition to grow strong.

What is your hero's number one fear? Make it happen. Maybe she's afraid to spoil her manicure doing the dishes. Or could your swashbuckling hero be afraid of spiders? Doesn't matter how bog or small, give your hero a fear they cannot overcome...yet.

So, pull out the chapter you are currently working on. Got it? Who is actively opposing your hero in this scene? Make the resistance bigger. Put an obstacle in the way. Tap into a fear. Now, how does the hero get around the obstacle? And no fair bringing in the sidekick to solve the problem. Heroes solve their own problems. Start writing. Don't stop until you have 250 new words.

Feeling pretty good about that, are you? Sgt. Wordslayer says, "Take the victory away from the hero. Quickly. Now." Burn another recipe card, get your mother-in-law back on the phone, tell the kids to clean their room. Make the world a more difficult place for your hero. Serve raw kale for dinner. And give me another 150 words.

Stand up straight. Salute your screen and repeat after me. Give. Your. Hero. Doubt. Say it one more time. Give your hero doubt. Nobody likes a know-it-all that never questions their own decisions. Nothing beats inner fear. Expose the hero's thoughts and feelings. How does your hero change their strategy or approach to overcoming the new resistance.

Give me five more jumping jacks. Got that blood boiling yet? Resistance is riction. When two objects come in contact, they grind each other down into a sweltering pile of rubble. Doesn't matter if the two objects are external or internal. It's the friction, the heat, that makes the story.

Is your blood boiling yet? If not, then the odds are your hero is still coasting. Kick the hero in the teeth. Make him tougher. Give her a reason to have a wicked tattoo. Everybody loves the champion's scars.

You there, hiding behind the coffee up. Step forward. Send in a comment with your hero's scars. Share a fear and tell us why it makes your character more believable.

Now pull out your favorite novel, and find the hero's fear. Find the resistance characters. Send us the name of the book, the hero's name, and the fear or resistance characters.

Dismissed!
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C.L. Phillips writes mystery novels while nestled under a hundred-year live oak tree in downtown Austin. Except in August. C.L writes about the the gap between what people want and what they actually do. Broccoli or chocolate chip cookies, anyone? Check out her web site: http://www.clphillips.com/ or find her onTwitter: @clphillips787

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Mysteries Revealed at Carina Press (Part 2 of 2)


By Linda Lovely

Angela James (pictured at left), the new Executive Editor of Carina Press, a subsidiary of Harlequin Enterprises Limited, says it’s no mystery why the new digital-first publishing house is interested in mysteries.

Carina is seeking first-rate manuscripts in a wide range of genres including mystery, thriller, science fiction, paranormal, family sagas, romance and erotica. Ms. James, who comes to Carina from Samhain Publishing, is an online press veteran.

The Sisters in Crime blog thanks her for her intriguing answers to questions about Carina’s policies and ambitions in this two-part blog entry. Here’s Part II:


How do you decide on an appropriate price for an ebook?


Price is generally determined by word count. I say generally because there are times when a book may fall in a higher word count but we choose to price it lower for reasons of marketing and sales.

There’s been a lot of conversation regarding fair ebook royalty percentages for authors. Your website states you do not pay advances but pay higher royalty percentages. Do you see publishing moving toward an industry standard ebook royalty percentage?

No, I don’t, though I don’t like to use “never” since that just tempts fate to prove me wrong. But print royalties aren’t standard; I don’t see digital royalties being different because that’s so individual to each publisher’s business plan/model.

According to your website, you don’t offer DRM—digital rights management. Does that mean people who download Carina ebooks can share them with others and/or read them on multiple devices?

Yes, absolutely. We believe that the book itself shouldn’t be an impediment to either buying or reading. We also recognize that people aren’t going to have only one device over the course of their lifetime, so they need to be able to move the book around. As for sharing—it’s an important part of reading culture. We’ve all shared books with friends and family at one time or another. We recognize that you may want to share a book with someone you know will love it—and we hope that encourages them to come back and buy more titles from either that author or from Carina Press. DRM-free is about making buying and reading so easy and pleasurable that the reader won’t have a reason not to come back for more!

What distribution channels do you plan to tap in addition to your own web bookstore?

You can find Carina Press books on third party etailers such as Amazon, Books on Board, Sony, Barnes & Noble, Kobo/Borders, All Romance Ebooks and more.

Though Carina is a digital-first publisher, your publishing contract includes print and audio rights. What factors would prompt you to publish a title as a paperback or create an audio version? What if a Carina author has a print opportunity elsewhere—would you release the rights?

Audible.com receives a list of our releases and they choose from that list which titles they believe will be the most successful, using their knowledge of their customers, buying habits and any holes in genres they might have. While we can encourage Audible to look at a particular title, they ultimately choose what goes to audio (which makes sense, when you think about it, since who better to know the audio market?). To date, they’ve chosen just under 50 of our 2010 titles.

We would not wish to see a competing title on the market, so we would be unable to release print rights, especially as we may wish to use them. When and if the time comes for us to put titles in print, all titles would be considered on a similar basis: audience, marketability, needs of the print channel, etc.

Do you plan to publish any mystery/thriller anthologies or short stories?

We haven’t compiled any anthologies to date (though we are doing a holiday collection, it’s not an anthology), so I can’t speak for plans of anthologies yet, but we would certainly be open to one. Digital is a wonderful place for shorter versions of genre fiction.



Award-winning author Linda Lovely writes romantic suspense novels featuring “smart, sexy heroines caught up in danger-packed situations that require them to partner with equally smart, sexy men.” Her novel, "Counterfeit," is a finalist in the Romantic Suspense category of the 2010 Golden Heart contest sponsored by the Romance Writers of America.

Tuesday, October 12, 2010

Mysteries Revealed at Carina Press (Part 1 of 2)


By Linda Lovely

Angela James
(pictured at left), the new Executive Editor of Carina Press, a subsidiary of Harlequin Enterprises Limited, says it’s no mystery why the new digital-first publishing house is interested in mysteries.

Carina is seeking first-rate manuscripts in a wide range of genres including mystery, thriller, science fiction, paranormal, family sagas, romance and erotica. Ms. James, who comes to Carina from Samhain Publishing, is an online press veteran.

The Sisters in Crime blog thanks her for her intriguing answers to questions about Carina’s policies and ambitions in this two-part blog entry. Here’s Part I:


What made Carina Press, a member of the Harlequin family, decide to expand its offerings beyond traditional romance and romantic suspense genres?

Digital-first publishing offers a lot of opportunities for experimentation and reaching new audiences, so it only made sense for us to open to other genres with an imprint that wasn’t branded as romance already. With the digital market expanding at an extraordinary rate every day, we believe there is room for tremendous growth in genre fiction outside romance in the digital community. We also have some exciting plans for some of our mystery/romantic suspense titles that we’re hoping to announce in the next month or so.

Why should a mystery or thriller author consider submitting to Carina Press?

I don’t suppose the response “because we rock!” will work as a satisfactory answer?

Alternate professional markets for genres such as mystery or thriller can be difficult to find. Carina Press brings to the table a wealth of editorial experience and marketing acumen. We can offer authors a partnership and a forward-thinking place to publish.

Your website indicates you’re open to the full range of mysteries—cozies, procedurals, historical mysteries and contemporaries—as well as psychological, legal, medical, and political thrillers. Are you receiving many submissions in these genres? Is there any niche that has fewer submissions than you’d like to see?

We see quite a few mystery submissions, actually, and the editors are thrilled with this. I wouldn’t say that there’s a particular subgenre of mystery that we wish we could see more of, because the spread is quite even there (though we do have an editor who’s still wishing for a pet-centric mystery series).

Thriller is the one genre we haven’t seen nearly as much of as we’d like. We’ve not yet acquired a manuscript in the genre, and it’s not for lack of trying!

How are you spreading word of your mystery/thriller offerings to fans of these genres?

We use a combination of websites and print media to market and promote to genres. Those include Suspense Magazine, RT, Dear Author, Fresh Fiction and more. And, of course, we are always open to suggestions for effective places to market to the non-romance crowd. I love to hear what’s working for others!

Your website says you’re interested in acquiring digital rights to published works. Does this include out-of-print mysteries/thrillers? Are you looking to acquire series backlists?

Yes, we would most definitely be interested in series backlists. Especially if the author is interested in continuing the series but, even if they’re only looking to republish an older series, we’d love to see it.

How many titles does Carina expect to publish in its first year?

In 2010, we’ll publish a little more than 100 titles.

How many mystery/thriller/romantic suspense titles have you acquired?

To date, of the almost 200 titles we've acquired for publication in 2010 and 2011, approximately 17% fall in the mystery/thriller/romantic suspense genres. As I noted elsewhere during the interview, we haven’t yet acquired any thrillers, but we are keen to do so (though we do have a science fiction military thriller releasing in January 2011 so I suppose that does count!).



Award-winning author Linda Lovely writes romantic suspense novels featuring “smart, sexy heroines caught up in danger-packed situations that require them to partner with equally smart, sexy men.” Her novel, "
Counterfeit," is a finalist in the Romantic Suspense category of the 2010 Golden Heart contest sponsored by the Romance Writers of America.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Hero or Victim?

By C.L. Phillips

Do you have a list of the most important lessons you've learned in your life? I do. I don't talk about them. Many of life's lessons come with more than a little pain. Maybe you rub that scar on your knee from when you learned the lesson about black diamond mogul ski runs. Or maybe you think wistfully about the love that slipped away before you learned how rare love can be.

But sometimes you can learn an important lesson simply by trying something new.

Several years ago, I had the good fortune to participate in a workshop led by Dr. Betty Sue Flowers. Perhaps her name is familiar. She worked with Joseph Campbell and Bill Moyers as they created the PBS series and subsequent book, The Power of Myth. Dr. Flowers is a poet, writer, professor, and former head of the LBJ Library in Austin, Texas.

In this workshop, Dr. Flowers divided the class into pairs. She said, "I want you to tell your partner the story of your life. Tell it as though you are a conquering hero. Whatever difficulties you've encountered in life, tell the story as though you've triumphed every single one. Go. You have two minutes."

My partner and I quickly got to work. Noise filled the room as twelve pairs of people began talking, moving their hands, telling the story of their lives. "SWITCH", said Dr. Flowers. My partner stopped talking and I began. I made up the most outrageous story of my life I could imagine. The facts were all basically true, but I glossed over the tough spots, focusing more on the outcome, my success.

"STOP", said Dr. Flowers. "Now, I want you to tell the same story, but this time, you are a victim."

My partner and I stared at each other. The room became so quiet you would swear you were at a funeral. My partner tried to start, but tears filled his eyes. I grabbed his hand. "It's ok, it's only a story", I said. Somehow he found the words. Dr. Flowers said, "SWITCH". Now it was my turn. A five hundred pound weight slammed into my body as I took a breath and started. I managed to eek out a couple of sentences. Sniffles and blowing noses pierced the silence. Nobody made eye contact.

A morose vibration filled the same room that only moments before danced with laughter. Dr. Flowers eyes twinkled as she said, "STOP. Now which felt better?"

We could barely mutter the answer, our spirits were so low. "Hero."

She said, "The facts were the same in both stories. You decide whether you live as the hero or the victim."

Uh-oh. Life lesson.

So, the next time you get together for a critique group or a SinC meeting, try this game. You need at least twenty people to clearly notice the room dynamic. And if you really want to see some raw emotions, instead of telling the story of your life, tell the story of your writing career. Be sure to bring Kleenex.

Everybody wants to be the hero, and when you write your own story remember this - if you are not the triumphant hero, it just means the story isn't over yet.

Write on!
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C.L. Phillips writes mystery novels while nestled under a hundred-year live oak tree in downtown Austin. Except in August. C.L writes about the the gap between what people want and what they actually do. Broccoli or chocolate chip cookies, anyone? Check out her web site: http://www.clphillips.com/ or find her onTwitter: @clphillips787

Sunday, October 10, 2010

Bouchercon Bound?


Are you registered for Bouchercon by the Bay in San Francisco? Check out the exciting events Sisters in Crime has planned for you.

Wednesday, October 13, 1:30 - 9:00 p.m., Hyatt Seacliff A&B

SinC into Great Writing. Manuscript Makeover: From Rough Draft to Ready.

Sisters in Crime (SinC) sponsors this triple-header pre-Bouchercon workshop at San Francisco's Hyatt Regency hotel. Featuring Elizabeth Lyon, the three workshops, with a break for dinner, cover Movement, Movement, Movement, Revision for Inner and Outer Scene Structure, and Revision for Strong Characterization and Distinctive Style. New York Times best-selling novelist, Ayelet Waldman will be the dinner keynote speaker.

A few spaces are still open at $50 for members, $150 for non-members. Register here.

Thursday, October 14, 10:00 a.m., Hyatt Grand Ballroom A

Sisters in Crime presents: What Readers Want. Sharing the results of a comprehensive study done in partnership with Bowker's PubTrack Consumer Service on what mystery readers are buying, and why and where .

Thursday, October 14, 3:00 – 5:30 p.m., Hyatt Atrium

Sisters in Crime Reception

Visit with the Board of Directors. Enjoy fruit, cupcakes and cookies. A cash bar will be close by. Open to all Bouchercon attendees.

And throughout the conference, stop by the Hospitality Suite co-hosted and staffed by SinC NorCal volunteers who promise to make sure you feel welcome.

Thursday, October 7, 2010

So, you want to know about query letters?

By Joyce Tremel

Congratulations! You finally have your manuscript polished to a shine and you're ready for the dreaded query process. Here are some tips to help make your query stand out (in a good way, of course!).

ELEMENTS OF A QUERY LETTER
1.    The Hook—A one or two sentence pitch intended to hook the agent reading your query.
2.    Plot Summary—This is really a continuation of your hook. Your summary should be from one, to at most four, short paragraphs. (One agent suggests making it only three sentences. I think that’s too short.) Remember that this is not a synopsis. The purpose of the query letter is to get the agent to want to read more. That’s it. Somewhere in these paragraph be sure to include the title of the book (in all caps), the word count, and the genre.
3.    Bio—This is where you list your publishing credits and what qualifies you to write this book. Only include credits and experience that are pertinent to the book. For example, if you have a degree in biophysics, there’s no need to mention it if your query is for a cozy featuring a quilter. On the other hand, if your book is a thriller and your protagonist is a scientist, you might want to include it.
4.    Why you chose this particular agent—This paragraph is optional. Some agents want it, others don’t care. If you’ve met the agent at a conference, or if you have a referral to the agent from one of her clients, definitely include this information and move this to the beginning of the query BEFORE your hook/summary paragraph.
5.    Closing—State that you’ll be happy to send them the completed manuscript, or more material, etc. Don’t forget to include your contact information.


QUERY FORMAT
1.    Typical business letter format—single spaced, with additional space between paragraphs, no indent, 1 or 1 ¼ inch margins. If sending a paper query, use letterhead with your contact info. In an e-query, put your contact info at the bottom.
2.    For a paper query, use Times New Roman, 12 point font. For e-queries use either Times New Roman or Arial. NEVER use colored ink or a colored font. Anything other than black is unprofessional.
3.    Use white paper only. Don’t use colored paper, fancy stationery, or scented anything. Don’t use e-mail stationery—keep the background plain white.
4.    Include a self-addressed stamped envelope (SASE) for snail mail queries.

MISCELLANEOUS TIPS FOR QUERYING
1.    In the words of Miss Snark, “Query widely.” Never send one query at time. Send in groups of at least ten, but if sending e-queries, be sure to address each agent individually. NEVER cc an e-query.
2.    Research agents. Only query agents who not only represent your genre, but the type of book you’ve written in that particular genre. For instance, an agent may state she represents mysteries, but if you look at her clients’ books, they may all be cozies. If you’ve written a police procedural, your book won’t fit her list. 
3.    Follow the agent’s instructions to the letter. Don’t include any material the agent doesn’t want with your query. If she wants the query formatted a certain way, do it.
4.    Never query until your book is finished.  This means written and revised several times, read by trusted colleagues, and revised again. A first, or even a second draft is not a completed book.
5.    If you get no requests for more material after your first batch of queries, re-evaluate your letter. Try to determine why. Revise and send another batch. Something to remember: Don’t query all your “A” list agents in the first batch. If they all reject, you can’t query them again with a revised letter.
6.    Rejection is part of the process. Don’t get upset when you get form rejections or no response at all. Many agents now go by the mantra “no response means no,” but don’t hesitate to send a second e-query in case your first one was lost. Don’t, however, send a third. And NEVER, EVER respond to a query rejection.
7.    Read agent blogs regularly. You will get all kinds of inside information on not only the agent’s likes and dislikes, but on the publishing industry in general.

RESOURCES

AGENT BLOGS
1.    Query Shark
2.    Janet Reid
3.    Bookends Literary Agency
4.    Nathan Bransford
5.    Kristen Nelson
6.    Miss Snark  (archives only)


SEARCH FOR AGENTS
1.    Agent Query
2.    Publisher’s Marketplace
3.    Query Tracker
4.    Preditors and Editors
5.    Absolute Write Forum
6.    Association of Authors Representatives (AAR)
7.    List of the 20 Worst Agents (avoid at all costs!)

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

In Memoriam - Dorothy Glassman Sucher, 1933-2010

On Sunday, October 3, I represented Sisters in Crime at a memorial service in Silver Spring, MD for long-time Sisters in Crime member, Dorothy Sucher, who had passed away on August 22 after a long illness. I'd like to share with you my remarks.

My name is Marcia Talley, and I’m national president of Sisters in Crime, an organization that was founded almost twenty five years ago by Sara Paretsky and other like-minded women to support the advancement of women who write mysteries.

From 1989 to 1991, Dorothy was national treasurer of Sisters in Crime. In1990, this "founding mother" gathered a group of local women together in her Maryland living room, elected officers, and the Chesapeake Chapter of Sisters in Crime was born. Today, the Chessie Chapter is one of the larger and more active of forty-six chapters in our organization, now world-wide.

I met Dorothy at a Chessie Chapter meeting in the mid-1990s, long before I became, like Dorothy, a published mystery writer. Back then, barriers to women existed everywhere in the mystery publishing field, and Sisters in Crime played a major role in helping to break down those barriers.

In Dorothy’s own words:

“It was harder for women than men to find a publisher, harder to get reviewed, harder still to get good reviews -- perhaps because virtually all the critics were men -- and harder to get bookstores to carry the books, let alone push them. Shoot-‘em-up hardboiled mysteries received critical respect, while the so-called feminine “cozies” were scorned. As soon as Sisters in Crime was formed–benefitting in large part from the new activism of the Women’s Movement–committees of volunteers were organized to research and document these kinds of inequities. They gathered statistical proof which was used by letter writing committees to lobby publishing houses, newspapers, and reviewers. We were impatient for change, and it seemed to us that changes came with agonizing slowness. But they came.

“It’s hard to believe at this point in history how unwelcoming the climate was in the 1980s and before for women mystery writers. As for female sleuths–forget it! Agatha Christie’s Miss Marple was long gone, and her successors were few. Nobody would have believed a time would come when male authors were publishing books with female sleuths under female pen-names, in hopes of greater sales! But of course that eventually happened, thanks in large part to the work of Sisters in Crime.”

Inequities still exist, of course, we have a long way to go, but it is due to pioneers like Dorothy that women who write mysteries today are more likely to get the attention they deserve.

So, on behalf of your three thousand sisters (and misters) in crime, we thank you, Dorothy. We couldn’t have done it without you.

In her beautiful book of essays, The Invisible Garden, Dorothy wrote about the challenges of tending a garden, “’Why am I doing this?’ I ask myself. ‘It’ll all be gone as soon as I’m dead.’ Then I remind myself that this is true of most human endeavors, and I go on gardening.”

I don’t want to disagree with you, Dorothy, but both mysteries you published with St Martin’s Press, Dead Men Don’t Give Seminars (which was nominated for an Agatha Award for best first novel) and Dead Men Don’t Marry are still for sale on Amazon.com. And if that isn’t a kind of immortality, I don’t know what is.

Read more about Dorothy's amazing career in The Washington Post.

Monday, October 4, 2010

By Jeffrey Marks

I’ve conservatively read 10,000 books in my lifetime. When I first began reading mystery fiction, I devoured everything, the good, the bad, and the barely made sense. Now that I’m approaching 50, I would like to think that I’ve learned from my reading habits and that I am a bit more discerning in my habits.


A good read to me must have two things: a devious plot and great characterization. As a writer, it’s a difficult combination to create. As Harriet Vane lamented in Gaudy Night, to breathe life into her characters meant that the plot changed in many ways from its tidy and methodical ways.

A good plot to me is essential. I grew up reading the books of Agatha Christie, Ellery Queen and John Dickson Carr where plot was king. I enjoyed matching wits with the author and seeing who came out on top. Locked rooms, impossible crimes, and dying clues were the stuff of magic for me, and I still enjoy a puzzling plot.

The problem was that many of these cases had characters who were little more than stereotypes, and I read the books for the plot, the sheer audacity of a criminal who could pull off a crime inside a locked room with no way in or out or the murderer who killed with impunity while 75 people looked on.

Sadly there are very few practitioners today who take the time to really lay out a complicated plot and an impossible crime is a rarity. In so many cases, it feels as if the story consists of five suspects, any of whom could be guilty. You don’t know until the last chapter when one of them makes a mistake and the case is solved, usually with a hero or heroine in mortal danger.

The book also has to have great characterization, which is not to say likable characters. I often read books with characters that I wouldn’t want to spend time with. That doesn’t make them any less fascinating. Dexter is a great example of this type of character. Some of the characters in Laura Lippman’s wonderful stand-alones fit the bill too. Walter Bowman in her latest makes my skin crawl, but he’s fascinating in his rationalization of what he’s done.

I see many characters who owe too big a debt to Marlowe or Marple. People are not stereotypes. People have quirks and foibles. They do things that annoys us. They do things that make us nod our heads in agreement.

While it might seem like an impossible task, I do have a variety of favorites in all genres who meet these standards. These are the books that fill my time now, and I am always looking for new authors who can meet the demands of plot and character.

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Jeffrey Marks is the Anthony-winning author of Intent to Sell: Marketing the Genre Novel along with a series of History of Mystery biographies including Who Was That Lady? and Atomic Renaissance: Women Mystery Writers of the 1940s/1950s. He can be reached through his website.

Sunday, October 3, 2010

Happy Belated Birthday, Dame Agatha

By C.L. Phillips

Did you ever forget a dear friends birthday, only to discover after the fact that it was a big one? A birthday that ended in a "zero"? One of my favorite authors, Agatha Christie celebrated her 120th birthday on September 15. Well, perhaps celebrated isn't exactly the right word, after all, Dame Christie passed away in 1976. She published over a hundred books, and her 1952 play Mousetrap is still on stage in the West End in London.

What I find most delightful about Agatha Christie is that now, thirty-four years after her death, her work is being adapted for graphic novels. Harper Collins started the adaptations in 2006, and nineteen of her novels have been issued in this form. As a collector of Tintin and Asterix stories, I look forward to tracking down one of Agatha Christie's mysteries.

In honor of her birthday, the BBC released a web-based archive. The archive contains audio interviews dating back to 1955. Listen as she explains how she became a novelist.

Belated well-wishers can still celebrate with her favorite cake, Delicious Death. You can find the recipe here. The recipe was inspired by a Miss Marple mystery, A Murder is Announced.

Her web site is filled with interesting content. Be sure to check out the blog for stories from her grandson. Could you imagine sitting around the fire, trying to guess "who-dun-it" with your grandmother, Agatha? The entire site is so entertaining, I'm kicking myself for not finding it until now.

And although I missed the big 120th birthday festival, the English Riveria beckons to me. This web site offers advice on sites, lodging, and activities. I can dream of a mystery writers conference in Torquay, can't I?
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Saturday, October 2, 2010

Calling all writers: Published and Pre-published

By Norma Huss

Writers find ideas everywhere. One of my ideas for a novel (in final drafts) came from a rural road sign. (The road's name may disappear even more completely than the murder victim.) An idea for a published short story came from more than a year of news about a murder and the trial.

Soap2
One of my favorite idea generators is my local paper's weekly Flashback column. One recent story, originally from August, 1910, told about the strange thefts of soap from the basement lavatories of the local post office. The thefts were solved when a large dead rat and 16 pounds of soap bars were found behind a locker. It appeared the rat had stolen each soap bar as it was replaced and dragged it sixty feet to its hiding place. The short item noted that it hadn't been determined if the rat starved to death or died from eating soap.

Crow
How could I spin that into a mystery with human consequences? An historic mystery with the boss docking the employee for stealing the soap before the rat was discovered, then the employee killing his boss? Other animals steal things. Crows steal shiny objects, perhaps? Someone's antique ring? Update the time to the current year? Or go forward to a future time with a story about a super mosquito that is trained to steal military secrets. Or is it a robot mosquito? Or how about a robot bear? Or a real bear five hundred years ago doing away with caches of food and the ensuing battle among hungry tribes?

Another article from July 1960, a mere fifty years ago, tells about a local fire
Old brandy
company's bicentennial celebration with a bottle of 100-year-old French brandy. There were 200 guests. The brandy that had been stored in a chest in the bank vault a century earlier, was mixed into a large bowl of punch. Everyone received a cup full, the mayor gave a toast, and the punch was consumed within seconds.

Nothing criminal there, right? But think of the possibilities. Your question for today is this:

How could that item be altered to create a mystery?


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Today's question by Norma Huss of the Sinc Blog Army, author of Yesterday's Body. http://www.normahuss.com

Friday, October 1, 2010

With Many Thanks to SinC’s First Social Networking Guru


by Judy Clemens

When I first met Lorraine Bartlett (aka Lorna Barrett, aka L.L. Bartlett) we were both unpublished authors joining forces in the Guppies to make our way in the writing world. I got to know her through small focus groups, a few (not enough!) face-to-face meetings at conferences, and personal e-mails. During the most recent years I’ve had the pleasure of seeing Lorraine not only get published, but get published with multiple series, be nominated for an Agatha, and become a NYT bestselling author! What a fun and satisfying trip it’s been so far.

Besides her own writing and creative marketing, Lorraine has put many, many hours into Sisters in Crime. She has volunteered in many ways, but most recently, and for the past three and a half years, she has become our very own Social Networking Guru, creating our Facebook and MySpace pages, maintaining a book club list, revamping our blog into a vibrant (almost living!) creature, and answering computer questions when none of the rest of us knew what to do. Before the era of Social Networking, she worked with the now archaic forms of computer lists and forms when the rest of us didn’t have a clue.

Lorraine is now going to take a rest from her SinC (volunteer!) work to pursue her writing and other interests, and we want to send her off with a hearty thank you, and a wish for much future success and joy within the business. With her talent and perseverance we are sure to see more great things. We’re glad if more time for writing means there will be more Booktown Mysteries, Victoria Square Mysteries, and – please! – more paranormal/psychological suspense books about Jeff Resnick (with whom I fell in love when I was lucky enough to read a draft before it was even published).

Best wishes to you, Lorraine, and thank you so, so much for all you’ve done for SinC. It is surely appreciated.

With hugs and handshakes and any other way we can cyberly show our thanks . . .

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Judy Clemens is the immediate past president of SinC, and is proud to say she knew Lorraine when…

Thursday, September 30, 2010

Stage 1 : Story Concept : Begin with the End in Mind

By C.L. Phillips


"Knock, knock."

"Who's there?"

"Your subconscious?"

"What do you want?"

"I've got a story idea for you."

Ah, if it were only so easy, right?  Ever have an idea pop into your head, so crystal clear that you start righting, only to finish 80,000 words later?  No, me neither.  I carve big lumps of word stone into story statues.  Clink.  Clink.  I chisel each word into existence by looking at both the positive and negative space.  What is said.  What is not.

Last night, I listened to Gary Provost, founder of the Writer's Retreat Workshop.  Again.  And again.  Gary has a beautiful way of distilling storytelling down to the emotional core.  Something happens to the hero of this story, something significant.  Because it happened, the hero wants something, badly, a prize or a goal.  The hero devises a plan of action, moving closer to the prize.  Forces oppose the hero at every turn.  As the plan of action unfolds, the stakes rise.  Moving toward the goal takes every bit of cunning, strength, and luck the hero can muster.  Still, it's not enough.  The hero hits bottom, emotionally, physically, mentally.  At this bleakest moment, the hero makes a decision to solider on.  The hero learns a lesson, gains more faith, changes internally.  As the hero continues, he's faced with a decision point.  He can gain his prize, his goal, but only if he gives up something he truly loves.  This journey satisfies a need or fills a hole in the hero's psyche.

Every story has each of these elements:
 

Inciting IncidentStory trigger ; what happens to hero
POV Character GoalPrize or Goal
StrategyPlan of Action
ConflictOpposing Forces
Rising Stakes What happens during the journey to make this more important, more meaningful to the hero - internally? Externally?
Bleakest MomentHero is at the lowest point; opposing forces are winning
LessonWhat does the hero learn? How does he change?
Decision PointWhat does the hero give up in exchange for the prize or goal? What is the cost?
HoleWhat need or emotional hole is filled by the decision? The need was there before the story began, and is the backstory.

What need or emotional hole is filled by the decision? The need was there before the story began, and is the backstory.

Then it hit me.  When you can define these elements, you've got your story idea defined.  One table.  With a quick glance, you see, feel and know what happens in a story.  Imagine what it could do for a synopsis or query letter.  You could boil 80,000 words down to a single crisp paragraph.

I pulled out my dog-eared copy of Lincoln Lawyer by Michael Connelly, determined to find each of these elements in the story.  I did.  That wasn't the exciting part.  The exciting part was when I found the main character, Mickey Haller saying, "I had come four hundred miles for five minutes but those minutes were devastating.  I thin the lowest point of my life and professional career came an hour later..."

There it was, the Bleakest Moment, chiseled out of the story stone, exposed for anyone to see.

Gary Provost said, "Do this analysis on fifty books, and then you'll be able to plot."

Sisters-in-Crime is a supportive community for emerging writers.  Let's take this blog one step further.  Join me on this journey of analyzing fifty best sellers.  One down, The Lincoln Lawyer, forty nine to go.

Copy the table, grab your favorite best seller (it can even be your own), and post your analysis in the comments for this blog post.  Let's see if we can hit fifty in two days.

Write on!
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C.L. Phillips writes mystery novels while nestled under a hundred-year live oak tree in downtown Austin. Except in August. C.L writes about the the gap between what people want and what they actually do. Broccoli or chocolate chip cookies, anyone? Check out her web site: http://www.clphillips.com/ or find her onTwitter: @clphillips787

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Never a Dull Moment

By Annette Dashofy

When I joined the Mary Roberts Rinehart (Pittsburgh) Chapter of Sisters in Crime, I really didn’t know what to expect. In the six years since then, that much hasn’t changed. Each meeting and event brings a new experience ranging from parties and picnics to being locked in jail cell.

Every year, one of our members opens their home to our group for a summer picnic. It’s a chance to socialize, eat, and possibly play croquet. Other annual outings include a Christmas Party and the Festival of Mystery where we pitch in as volunteers to help Mystery Lovers Bookshop put on its spring extravaganza.

Some of our meetings include workshops, lead by local published authors and experts. Topics can range from the craft of writing, to publishing, to police procedure. We’ve taken field trips to an area police department (hence the locked-in-jail episode) and to a sportsmen’s club firing range where we had a chance to learn about firearms and then actually shoot a variety of them.

We’ve even taken on service projects by donating and helping to plant a tree at the Mary Roberts Rinehart Nature Park as homage to our namesake.

Some of our biggest adventures, though, have been our writing retreats.

At first, the retreats were held in Deep Creek, Maryland at a home belonging to the in-laws of one of our members. It was a huge lodge on the lake with room for nearly twenty. Unfortunately, that home is no longer available to us, so when members expressed an interest in reviving the retreat, we had to find a different locale. This past spring, twelve of us traveled to Confluence, PA where we took over Paddler’s Lane Bed and Breakfast. Ramona Long attended as our guest presenter for what would be an exciting weekend…for many reasons.

The workshops were interesting and educational. The food was delicious. Chocolate and wine flowed freely. Unfortunately, so did the Youghiogheny River outside our backdoor. You see, we happened to schedule our retreat on the very weekend when the area’s largest snowfall in recent memory happened to melt. The resulting flood covered the only road into Paddler’s Lane as well as several of the main roads in and out of the valley. We worked on our writing while keeping one eye on the river coming closer and closer to the house.

With twelve women mystery writers trapped in a house in a flood, you can well imagine the stories we conjured up.

I’m happy to report the flood waters receded in time for us to depart on Sunday as originally intended.

Next year’s retreat is now in the planning phase. We’re looking for new venue slightly farther away from water.

With this group, no matter what the workshop, party, or field trip, you can expect the unexpected. And you can count on having a good time.

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Annette Dashofy is the president of the Mary Roberts Rinehart Chapter of Sisters in Crime. Her short mysteries have been published online at Mysterical-e and Spinetingler. One of them was a nominee for a 2007 Derringer Award. Check out Annette's web site and blog,

Monday, September 27, 2010

Darker Good Reads


by Cynthia Chow

Murder mysteries are, by definition, morbid. However, I admit a preference for the lighter side of death, namely humorous mysteries that refrain from completely glossing over death but do highlight the lighter side of the investigations. So it was with trepidation that I approached Timothy Hallinan’s latest Poke Rafferty thriller, The Queen of Patpong. Despite my having loved his sarcastic and hard-boiled Simeon Grist series and thoroughly enjoyed the previous entries in the Poke Rafferty Bangkok-based series, The Queen of Patpong confronts topics guaranteed to have me shuddering; namely, the sex trade and exploitation of minors.

And yet…The series began with Poke already in a relationship with Rose, a former bar-girl who now owns a cleaning business and raising Miaow, a too-wise-for-her-age street urchin the couple recently adopted. The sudden reappearance of a menacing figure from Rose’s past as a prostitute though, brings to light a life Rose cannot forgot but has amazingly overcome. As the novel shifts to flashbacks to Rose’s childhood and path to prostitution, Hallinan brilliantly explores the ugly history of the sex trade in Thailand without being forced or preachy. In one of the most powerful and haunting scenes a young Rose sits with her parents and teachers as they negotiate her fate. The growing horror as Rose slowly begins to realize that her father plans to sell her into prostitution is so understated and menacing that the reader shares her repulsion, yet the scene is so quiet and underplayed that the scene itself is neither repellant nor exploitative. Perhaps that is why it is so powerful.

The author has obviously devoted much research into the history of Bangkok’s sex trade, a topic that has become something of a joke to Westerners. The relationships between the bar-girls, who create their own families within the brothels, lighten the novel and prove to be both sad and hopeful. Rose’s eventual escape from this world is as well powerful as she shows Miaow that it is something to hold with pride, not shame. Surprisingly, when the novel shifts back to present time and the figure who has come back to claim Rose the reader may feel a little disappointed as it becomes more of the traditional action-packed thriller centered on the charming and protective Poke. However, this is an extraordinarily positive, fascinating, and witty read that is unforced and always entertaining.

Another surprising mystery that I normally would have ignored had it not been for the record of the author was Live toTell, by Lisa Gardner. While violence against children is never a subject I can warm to, violence perpetuated by them is equally unappealing. And yet again…The opening scene that depicts the menace of domestic violence is horrific, made even more so when the identity of the abuser is revealed. Gardner brings back the acerbic Detective DD Warren and introduces two women, one of whom overcame a tragic past that cost her her family and who now works in a unit that attempts to heal similarly damaged children, and the other a woman held captive by her love for the abuser she believes will eventually kill her. Cases involving the murder and suicides of entire families all become tied together, with the detective trying to distinguish the victims from the killers. Normally this is a topic I would avoid like the plague, as children as murderers is a subject so repellant and against nature that it creeps me out and has me avoiding playgrounds. However, like Hallinan, Gardner has crafted a well-written novel that balances fascinating and engaging characters and quick dialogue with a plot that educates and entertains. The suspense is unrelenting with enough twists to mislead and surprise readers. These two authors share a talent for writing about horrific crimes without repelling or manipulating the reader. Despite their darkness, these two novels can be enjoyed even by readers who prefer the lighter side of murder.

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Cynthia (Cindy) Chow developed a love for mystery novels after working summers in a failing used book & comic store (there was a lot of free time). Born and raised on the island of Oahu, she balances the librarian lifestyle with obsessions for motorcycles and high heels. Occasionally at the same time, much to the dismay of her parents.

A Brief Talk with Carola Dunn

by Norma Huss
Carola Dunn was born and grew up in England. After graduating from Manchester University, she set off around the world, but only made it halfway, to Fiji, before turning back to get married. Carola lived in Southern California for 20 years, and then moved to Eugene, Oregon, where she lives now. On her website she says, "I love it here, love the changing seasons. Contrary to reports, it doesn't rain all the time, and you don't absolutely have to wear Birkenstocks! I'm not far from the Willamette River, and walk there every morning with Trillian."

Sinc Blog: Carola, you started your writing career with Regencies, then began writing the Daisy Dalrymple series set in the 1920s. Now you have a new series as well, Cornish mysteries set in the 1960s.

 Is there any particular reason that you've chosen those time periods to write about?

Carola:  I started writing Regencies after having read Georgette Heyer's so many times I knew what was coming on the next page. I tried a few Regencies being written at the time (late '70s) and decided they were so bad I could do at least as well, and thereby put off getting a "proper" job after years of part-time and temp work. England's Regency period was very short (technically 1811-1820, or '21, depending on your definition), but for some reason it gave rise to a different sort of romance story from other periods. I was lucky enough to sell my first ms, so instead of looking for that proper job, I went on writing.

My Regencies vary from "comedies of manners" to time travel, via smugglers, spies, real historical events (eg the Battle of Waterloo), ghosts, and fairytales retold with a Regency setting. I wrote for several different publishers, and was writing for two when, within six months of each other, both stopped publishing the genre. I was actually in the middle of a 3 book contract at the time (later I did manage to sell the two unpublished mss to a different publisher and went on writing for them for several years). For some time I'd been thinking I'd like to try my hand at something different, but as long as I was making a living with Regencies it was hard, not to say impossible, to switch. This, obviously, was the moment to give it a go. Thus was Daisy Dalrymple born.

I've been asked many times why I didn't stay in the Regency period when I started writing mysteries. It would have meant a whole lot less research! But, apart from the challenge, I didn't want to confuse readers as to whether they were getting a mystery or a romance. I chose the 1920s because I saw parallels between the two periods. Both the Regency and the 1920s were times of great change, especially for women. Just one aspect: Think of the enormous hooped skirts of the earlier Georgians and comparative freedom of the Empire line dresses of the Regency; regression followed, to crinolines and bustles, and worse, to the "Grecian bend" of the Edwardians, but the first World War brought liberation in clothes as in so many other ways.

As for the Cornish mysteries, I said in a foreword that the setting is "somewhere between my childhood memories of Cornwall and the present reality." The fact is, after 30 years of checking every historical detail, I didn't want to be pinned down too closely. The two books so far seem to have settled more or less in the late '60s, but if readers find bits and pieces that don't quite fit, I disclaim all responsibility.  

SinC Blog:  You are originally from England but now write from your home in Oregon. Do you visit England to see the areas you write about?

Carola:  I go every couple of years. My sister lives in Cornwall, a great help! As for Daisy, some of the books are set in imaginary places; some, for various reasons, are in real places thinly disguised by a name change (usually acknowledged in an Author's Note). When I use the real name of a real place, I've been there and researched it thoroughly. For instance, the next Daisy book, Anthem for Doomed Youth, is set largely in Saffron Walden. It happens that I went to school there, so I was already familiar with the town, but I went last year and walked around all the places I intended to use in the story. I also spoke to library and museum people, got their email addresses, and after coming home pestered them with many questions. It's impossible to be sure in advance of exactly every detail that will come up when writing. Email and the web between them make research much easier than when I started writing 30 years ago. Make that VERY much easier. 

Sinc Blog:  Tell us about the research that enables you to not only find a situation to build a mystery around, but gives you the words and experiences that fit precisely into that time period? And, once you are "in" a time period, how easy or hard is it to change into writing about another time period?

Carola:  At this point in the Daisy series, with 18 published and a 19th in production, finding a situation is largely a matter of trying to work out what I haven't already done! That perspiration/inspiration combination. Apart from research in period detail, I read a lot of novels written during the '20s. They give a better feel for the language of the time than any amount of non-fiction. They also provide a lot of information about the way people thought and lived, the social conventions.

The advantage of the periods I've chosen, obviously, is that there is plenty of contemporary material available, and it's easy to read. Earlier periods would be much more difficult.

Switching periods from the Regency to the 1920s was quite confusing at times. For a few years I was writing both, and I'd find my '20s characters speaking very Regency language. Once I'd stopped writing Regencies, '20s language came easily. As far as experiences--the customs and conventions of the times were not difficult to keep separate. Daily life changed enormously in that 110 years, in so many ways.

SinC Blog:  What is your writing day or week like?

Carola:  I "work" six days a week for about 6 hours a day. That's sitting at the computer. But it doesn't include research done in the evenings and, for example, this interview, which I'm completing on a Sunday. Not to mention that my mind, conscious and unconscious, is working on the story I'm writing 24/7. Sunday is my "day off"--laundry and yard work--but I woke up this morning with several ideas which I had to write down at once, though I won't develop them till tomorrow.  

SinC Blog:  Last question: Will you tell us more about your latest or your favorite book?

Carola:  My latest book, A Colourful Death, is the second in the Cornish Mystery series. The protagonist is Eleanor Trewynn, a widow in her 60s. She spent her life travelling all over the world, working for an international charity. Retiring to a small fishing village in Cornwall, she bought a cottage and turned the ground floor into a charity shop. In this book, her neighbour, Nick Gresham, an artist, is suspected of killing a fellow-painter, so Eleanor tries to find out who really did it. The other POV character is Nell's niece, Megan, a local police detective with an extremely grumpy boss.

Next April, the 19th Daisy Dalrymple mystery, Anthem for Doomed Youth, will be out. It's very much concerned with the after-effects of WWI. Daisy and her husband, DCI Alec Fletcher of Scotland Yard, find themselves involved in two cases that appear to be completely separate, but turn out to be connected--or are they?

I hope readers will visit my blog.  I'm also on Facebook.


SinC Blog: Thank you for visiting SinC into the Depths of Mystery, Carola.

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Norma Huss has been writing mystery for years, but only had her first novel published last year. YESTERDAY’S BODY was published by Wings ePress, Inc. Another mystery, DEATH OF A HOT CHICK is ready to make the rounds of agents. She’s a wife, mother, and grandmother as well as an advocate of a local bloodhound search and rescue unit. Visit her web site.

Saturday, September 25, 2010

Special for readers (and remember, writers are readers, too)

Out of all the various kinds (cozy, thriller, paranormal, noir, suspense, something different every time, a mix of which ones, anything else) what kind of mysteries do you like to read?

Friday, September 24, 2010

What Are You Reading?

Sisters in Crime consists of authors, librarians and booksellers and mystery READERS.  (In fact, we're all readers.)  A few of us have compared notes.  We hope you'll take a look and then share what you're currently reading.

Nancy Martin:  I just finished the new Susan Isaacs AS HUSBANDS GO, a murder mystery with snappy dialogue and a peek into upscale suburban life on Long Island. The wife wants to know why her devoted plastic surgeon husband was murdered by--good heavens!---a hooker. Isaacs is always entertaining.

And I'm reading STILL MISSING by newcomer Chevy Stevens, a harrowing story of a woman who is kidnapped and held captive by a man she calls The Freak. My review: OMG.

Mary Jane Maffini:  If summer must end, I suppose I’ll survive because of the crop of books that has bloomed in my ‘to be read’ piles around the house, each one near a prime reading spot. My bedtime book is THE LONG QUICHE GOODBYE by Avery Aames. So far this is a delicious and cozy. Great fun so far.  Meanwhile, down in the living room, I am rereading THE MARX SISTERS, a 1994 book by Barry Maitland. I rarely reread, but this is a chance to see DS Kathy Kolla meet her famous supervisor DCI David Brock for the first time. Although the books have become darker and edgier over time, this remains one of my favorite police procedural series.

Ellery Adams:  I'm reading Catching Fire, the second book in The Hunger Games Trilogy by Suzanne Collins. Though classified as Young Adult fiction, I'd be wary of letting younger kids read the arena-style gladiator-type killings, but I'm fine with it! For me, it was the voice of the heroine (Katniss) that lured me into the first book and has kept me coming back for more. I will read Mockingjay next and then The Forgotten Garden by Kate Morton.

Paige Shelton:  Just started BRIGHT OF THE SKY (Book One of The Entire and the Rose) by Kay Kenyon. Don’t usually like science fiction, but got this one by accident. Not just a bunch of tech-talk. Good characters, good story. 

And from  a couple of the SinC Blog Army Soldiers: 

Norma Huss:  I'm reading Rhys Bowen's FOR THE LOVE OF MIKE, a murder mystery set in 1904, that, besides murder, reveals sweatshop working conditions for immigrant girls in the garment industry. Third of a series I just discovered.  I just finished Sandra Brown's SMASH CUT, a thriller among the privileged wealthy with a ticking clock ending. My review. Hold on to your hats!

And just to prove that great minds think alike:

C.L. Phillips:  I'm reading Suzanne Collins trilogy HUNGER GAMES, CATCHING FIRE, and MOCKINGJAY.  I recommend reading all three back-to-back, after you've sent your husband and children out of the house for the weekend.  Have your meals delivered, and don't answer the phone.  You'll fall into a spell you won't want to leave.   Katniss could take Lord Voldermort any day.

And what are YOU reading?

Thursday, September 23, 2010

SWAT Boot Camp : Object Obstacle Course

 By C.L. Phillips


Attention!

Well novelist, I see you are back for another SWAT Boot Camp session with Sgt. Wordslayer.  Remember what SWAT means?  Stop Withering Away Tension.    Know what else SWAT means?  Stop Writing Average Things.

Grab your pencil and a notepad.  Step back from the keyboard.  What?  You don't have a notepad?  Where do you write down the snippets of conversation you overhear in the coffee shop?  Where do you scribble down all the little ideas you have?  You better have a notepad.  Something small.  Shove it in your pocket or purse, or inside your bra.  I don't care.  But do not ever leave home without it.  If I catch you without your notepad, I'll smoke you.  Ten verbs.  I promise.

Now drop and give me five ordinary objects that serve as clues in your current WIP.  Quick.  Five objects.  Murder and mayhem require physical clues.  Get cracking.  What?  You're not writing that kind of novel?   Tough.  Pretend.  You're a mystery novelist, remember?  Now give me one unusual object.  Hey, you there in the back, stop feigning writer's block.  You're not allowed to think during this exercise, so it's impossible to have writer's block.  Look around the room.  What do you see?  Write down those five objects.

Quick, now drop and give me five outstanding verbs.  New ones.  No cheating by using the verbs you've used before.  Chop, chop.  You're not writing the great American novel.  Verbs, people.  Now.  Got 'em?  Did you write them down?  Or are you simply reading and pretending to follow along?  Don't be a wanna-be.  Writers write.  So write.  NOW.  (This is where you scream at the top of your lungs, YES, Sergeant Wordslayer.)  Good.

Now, pair up the five objects with the five verbs.  And pull one more verb out of your...head ...for the unusual object.  Got it?

Now for the obstacle course....take your object and verb pair, and give it a symbolic meaning.

What?  You don't understand me?  Let me explain.  Make your object mean something more than what it is.  Every great mystery is filled with symbols and deeper meanings.  How in the world do you expect to write the next DaVinci Code or relegate J.K. Rowling to the dust bin with a one-dimensional story?

Oh, so now you're crying, "why didn't you tell me this first?  My object isn't special enough."  That is exactly the point.  Nothing is special until you make it so.  Until you give the reader a reason to care, every word is flat, meaningless.  Anything can be a symbol.  The more common the object, the easier it is to hide in plain sight.  The more common the object, the higher the probability your reader has this same object in their home.

Examples, you want stinking examples?  Okay, I'll give you my examples, but in return I expect you to post your list of objects and verbs in the comments for this post.

Objects:  oak tree, phone, tennis ball, newspaper, door, first edition of Tom Sawyer ( the unusual object)
Verbs :  whistle, row, share, bark, intimidate, sooth
Pairs :  oak tree whistles, phone barks, tennis ball rows, newspaper shares, door intimidates, first edition soothes
Meanings :  oak tree - silent strength, phone - love, tennis ball - adventure, newspaper - insight, door - opportunity, first edition - legacy

Are you ready for the final step?

Pull out your current work in progress.  Today, we're going to Whip that WIP in shape with a little Sniper Object Training.  Grab a chapter or ten pages.  Get out your pencil.  Quickly now, go through the pages and circle all the objects.  OBJECTS ONLY LADIES and GENTLEMEN.  And no, this doesn't mean every single noun on the page.  But it could.  You decide.  Yes, gosh-darn it.  Make a decision.  Circle the objects.

Finished?

Ok, that was the easy part.  Now, go back and write a new verb with each object.  You know what's coming next, right?  Yep, you've got to give the object a meaning. 

Now, I want you to reach inside your brain.  Slap that huge ego of yours.  Repeat after me.  "The only person that cares about my WIP is ME."  Now stand up and scream at the top of your lungs.  "I WILL NOT SETTLE FOR MEDIOCRITY."  Wave your arms in the air.  Get that blood flowing.  Scream, "I AM THE SYMBOL QUEEN."  Or King, as your gender dictates.

And yes, a recipe card can be a symbol.  But it better be a darn good recipe.  Scratch that.  It better be molecular gastronomy.  Remember, you are the only one that cares.

Why are we TARGETING OBJECTS?  Because when objects become symbols, the object transports the reader to the emotions you want the reader to experience.  Symbols are the Humvees of the novelists desert.  Put some gas in your tank and put three symbols in your WIP.

And if you dare to reply to this post, give us your objects, verbs, meanings, and symbols.  Remember, writers write.  Post your answers to this drill.  Get on the SWAT Team.  And at the risk of giving you a fat head, pat yourself on the back.  You've completed the Object Obstacle Course.

Dismissed!
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C.L Phillips writes mystery novels while nestled under a hundred-year live oak tree in downtown Austin. Except in August. C.L writes about the the gap between what people want and what they actually do. Broccoli or chocolate chip cookies, anyone? Check out her web site: http://www.clphillips.com/ or find her onTwitter: @clphillips787